Vintage Recorders MK II - UK Vintage Radio Repair and Restoration Discussion Forum

reel-to-reel-man · 27th Oct 2005, 7:14 pm

My brother and I have been working on my site nad have hpdated it have a look

http://www.vintagerecorders.co.uk/index.htm

comments?

Mike Phelan · 28th Oct 2005, 8:24 am

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Originally Posted by reel-to-reel-man

My brother and I have been working on my site nad have hpdated it have a look

http://www.vintagerecorders.co.uk/index.htm

comments?

R to R
A tremendous effort! The graphics look great - clean and un-fussy.
The bad news: (sorry to be pedantic)

Not enough white space - text is a bit indigestible and maybe would also benefit from a small amount of colour.
Lots of missing punctuation - this alters the meanings of some things and makes it difficult to follow.
I picked two of the gallery items at random and found two typos - defiantly for definitely and consul for console. There may be more.

I hope that you do not mind me pointing these out and that my criticisms are constructive - if you want, I can put my money where my mouth is and give you a bit of assistance on this with a PM - FOC of course!

PS - I have read this post ten times!

reel-to-reel-man · 28th Oct 2005, 8:51 am

Please! point out more, I would rather them found then seen by others

27th Oct 2005, 7:14 pm	#1
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28th Oct 2005, 8:51 am	#3
reel-to-reel-man Heptode Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Paignton, Devon, UK. Posts: 805	Re: Vintage Recorders MK II Please! point out more, I would rather them found then seen by others __________________ Vintage recorder collector www.vintagerecorders.co.uk